Tuesday, November 26, 2019
What Is Imagery A Complete Guide
What Is Imagery A Complete Guide SAT / ACT Prep Online Guides and Tips A literary device is a technique a writer uses to convey ideas and messages to their readers. That means that as readers, we need to understand and use literary devices to fully understand a workââ¬â¢s major themes! Today, weââ¬â¢re going to take a closer look at how to use imagery to analyze a text. Weââ¬â¢ll start by giving you the imagery definition before talking about why itââ¬â¢s an important tool for analyzing a text. Then weââ¬â¢ll walk you through some imagery examples in poetry and fiction and show you exactly how to analyze the imagery in each. By the end of this article, youââ¬â¢ll be able to talk about imagery in literature like a pro, so letââ¬â¢s get started. Seriously. Once you know what you're looking for, you'll see it everywhere! What Is Imagery? Definition and Explanation Have you ever read a book that makes you feel like youââ¬â¢re seeing, feeling, smelling, or tasting the same thing as the character youââ¬â¢re reading about? (We had that experience the first time Harry Potter tries butterbeer in Hogsmeade.) If you have, you can thank imagery for that experience! Imagery is the act of using language to create images in the readerââ¬â¢s mind. Writers use descriptive words and phrases to help the reader feel like theyââ¬â¢re...well, wherever the writer wants them to be! Basically, the writer is trying to create a ââ¬Å"mental imageâ⬠for the reader through the words they choose. Hereââ¬â¢s how one of the greatest horror writers of all time, Stephen King, describes imagery: Imagery does not occur on the writerââ¬â¢s page; it occurs in the readerââ¬â¢s mind. To describe everything is to supply a photograph in words; to indicate the points which seem the most vivid and important to you, the writer, is to allow the reader to flesh out your sketch into a portrait. In other words: you can think of imagery as painting with words in order to fuel the readerââ¬â¢s imagination! An easy way to spot imagery in a text is to pay attention to words, phrases, and sentences that connect with your five senses (sight, smell, taste, touch, and sound). Thatââ¬â¢s because writers know that in order to capture a readerââ¬â¢s attention, they need to engage with them mentally, physically, and emotionally. Since imagery is designed to connect a reader to a text, itââ¬â¢s one of the most powerful tools a writer has to communicate their themes and messages. The 2 Types of Imagery Any time a writer engages a readerââ¬â¢s senses, theyââ¬â¢re using imagery...which means imagery is a really broad literary device. In general, however, imagery fits into two big categories: literal and figurative. Literal Imagery: Examples and Explanation With literal imagery, a writer is literally describing things to the reader. (Pretty straightforward, huh?) Writers often use literal imagery to describe the setting, characters, and situation for a reader. Literal imagery helps the reader picture where characters are, understand what characters are doing, and even foreshadow what might happen next. (For example, if the character is in a dark, dirty alley, theyââ¬â¢re probably in a more dangerous situation than if the character is skipping through a field of daisies.) Letââ¬â¢s take a look at an example of literal imagery from Michael Crichton's Jurassic Park so you can see what we mean. In this scene, Dr. Alan Grant, Lex Murphy, and Tim Murphy are trying to hide from a tyrannosaurus rex: They were closer to the waterfall now, the roar much louder. The rocks became slippery, the path muddy. There was a constant hanging mist. It was like moving through a cloud. The path seemed to lead right into the rushing water, but as they came closer, they saw that it actually went behind the waterfall. The tyrannosaur was still looking downstream, its back turned to them. They hurried along the path to the waterfall, and had almost moved behind the sheet of falling water when Grant saw the tyrannosaur turn. Then they were completely behind the waterfall, and Grant was unable to see out through the silver sheet. Now that youââ¬â¢ve read this passage, close your eyes and picture the scene. Youââ¬â¢re probably picturing a giant waterfall, a hungry tyrannosaurus rex, and a lot of danger, right? Thatââ¬â¢s because the literal imagery in this passage paints a very specific, literal picture that helps you imagine whatââ¬â¢s happening in this moment! Magic, right? Not quite. Imagery works because the writer uses descriptive words and phrases to help paint a picture. Letââ¬â¢s take a look at the first few lines again and pick out some of the descriptive language that helps shape the scene: They were closer to the waterfall now, the roar much louder. The rocks became slippery, the path muddy. There was a constant hanging mist. It was like moving through a cloud. These lines are almost exclusively description, and Crichton uses phrases like ââ¬Å"rocks became slipperyâ⬠and ââ¬Å"constant hanging mistâ⬠to help you imagine exactly whatââ¬â¢s happening. A good way to pick out literal imagery is to look for nouns, then see how theyââ¬â¢re described. For example, the noun ââ¬Å"waterfallâ⬠is described as having a ââ¬Å"roarâ⬠that gets ââ¬Å"louderâ⬠the closer the characters get! From an analysis perspective, these literal images all work together to help build the mood, or tone, of the scene. In this case, the imagery of the scene contributes to its tense and suspenseful tone. The environment is treacherousnot only are the rocks slick, but the characters have trouble seeing through the mist and water. One false move, and theyââ¬â¢ll be a tasty snack for a hungry dinosaur! Use this picture as inspiration for finding connotation! (This will all make sense in a second.) Figurative Imagery: Examples and Explanation Unlike literal imagery, figurative imagery uses on the non-literalor metaphoricalmeaning of words to paint a picture for the reader. Almost all words have two meanings: their denotation and connotation. The denotation of a word is its literal, dictionary definition. Figurative imagery, on the other hand, relies on the connotation- or implied meaning- of words and phrases to help shape a textââ¬â¢s themes and ideas. To see how figurative imagery works, letââ¬â¢s look at the first line of Shakespeareââ¬â¢s ââ¬Å"Sonnet 130,â⬠where the speaker is describing his lady love: My mistressââ¬â¢ eyes are nothing like the sun; Okay. Letââ¬â¢s zero in on the word ââ¬Å"sunâ⬠here. According to Merriam-Webster, the literal definition of the word ââ¬Å"sunâ⬠is ââ¬Å"the luminous celestial body around which the earth and other planets revolve, from which they receive heat and light, which is composed mainly of hydrogen and helium.â⬠But the speaker doesnââ¬â¢t literally mean that his mistressââ¬â¢ eyes arenââ¬â¢t like a ball of gas! So what does he mean? To figure this out, letââ¬â¢s look at the figurative imagery here. Take a minute and think of some of the implied or metaphorical meanings of the word ââ¬Å"sun.â⬠The word might make you think of warmth and happiness. It also might make you think of other images like burning, blazing, or fiery brightness. With this figurative imagery in mind, this line is better read as ââ¬Å"my mistressââ¬â¢s eyes arenââ¬â¢t bright, warm, or happy.â⬠Not only does figurative imagery help this line make more sense, it also clues readers into the message of the poem: that you can recognize someoneââ¬â¢s faults and still love them and find them beautiful. One more quick note: because youââ¬â¢re a savvy reader, youââ¬â¢ve probably realized that this line from Shakespeare is also a metaphor, which is a comparison between two seemingly unrelated objects (in this case, ââ¬Å"eyesâ⬠and ââ¬Å"sunâ⬠). Writers often use other literary devices like metaphor, simile, and personification to help create vivid imagery for the reader. So donââ¬â¢t be surprised if you see imagery overlapping with other literary techniques! Can an Example of Imagery be Both Literal and Figurative at the Same Time? Absolutely! In fact, itââ¬â¢s quite common to see writers use literal and figurative imagery simultaneously. Take the first stanza of William Wordsworthââ¬â¢s poem, ââ¬Å"Daffodilsâ⬠: I wandered lonely as a cloud That floats on high oââ¬â¢er vales and hills,When all at once I saw a crowd,A host, of golden daffodils;Beside the lake, beneath the trees,Fluttering and dancing in the breeze. This stanza combines literal and figurative imagery. Literally, the images in this stanza help us see the speaker wandering around alone until he stumbles upon a patch of daffodils that are growing by a lake. This imagery is important to understanding Wordsworthââ¬â¢s poetry, which often explores the relationship between nature and man. The figurative imagery helps us learn a little more about the speaker, whoââ¬â¢s an outsider. We can infer this because of the imagery he gives us; he imagines himself as a cloud floating over everything, able to see whatââ¬â¢s going on but unable to participate. The daffodils, on the other hand, represent society. The imagery here is happy (the daffodils are ââ¬Å"goldenâ⬠and ââ¬Å"dancingâ⬠), which is how the speaker views society as someone on the outside looking in. Imagery in Poetry: ââ¬Å"Hope is the thing with feathersâ⬠by Emily Dickinson Now that you know more about imagery, letââ¬â¢s look at a poem that uses imagery to portray its major themes: ââ¬Å"ââ¬ËHopeââ¬â¢ is the thing with feathers - That perches in the soul -And sings the tune without the words -And never stops - at all - And sweetest - in the Gale - is heard -And sore must be the storm -That could abash the little BirdThat kept so many warm - Iââ¬â¢ve heard it in the chillest land -And on the strangest Sea -Yet - never - in Extremity,It asked a crumb - of me. Imagery can make something abstract, like an emotion or theory, seem more concrete and tangible to the reader. By using imagery, writers can evoke the feeling they want to talk about in their readers...and by making their readers feel, writers can also help readers connect to the messages in their work. In this example, Emily Dickinson takes the abstract idea of ââ¬Å"hopeâ⬠and compares it to a bird. Dickinson paints images of hope doing all the same things a bird does: it ââ¬Å"perches,â⬠ââ¬Å"sings,â⬠and keeps ââ¬Å"so many warmâ⬠with its feathers. And despite all these gifts, hope never ââ¬Å"asked a crumbâ⬠of anything in return. By using imagery to take an abstract idea (hope) and make it concrete (a bird), Dickinson helps readers understand the nature of hope. For Dickinson, hope is something that costs little to have and yet offers us comfort in all of lifeââ¬â¢s toughest situations. Imagery in Fiction: Dracula by Bram Stoker Imagery can be an equally powerful tool for fiction writers, too. In Dracula, Bram Stoker uses imagery to drive home the horror of the novel. Letââ¬â¢s take a look at one particularly stand-out scene, where Arthur Holmwood has to kill his former fiancee, Lucy Westenra, who has been turned into a vampire: The Thing in the coffin writhed; and a hideous, blood-curdling screech came from the opened red lips. The body shook and quivered and twisted in wild contortions; the sharp white teeth champed together till the lips were cut, and the mouth was smeared with a crimson foam. But Arthur never faltered. He looked like a figure of Thor as his untrembling arm rose and fell, driving deeper and deeper the mercy-bearing stake, whilst the blood from the pierced heart welled and spurted up around it. His face was set, and high duty seemed to shine through it; the sight of it gave us courage, so that our voices seemed to ring through the little vault. Remember how we talked about how imagery can set a tone or mood? Thatââ¬â¢s certainly the case here. Lucy is visually described not as a woman but as a ââ¬Å"thing,â⬠and the ââ¬Å"blood-curdling screechâ⬠she lets out is a great example of how auditory imageryor the sound of a scenecan contribute to its overall effect. (In this case, it amps up the horror of a once-delicate Englishwoman being transformed into a bloodthirsty beast.) It's the imagery associated with Lucy that shows readers how vicious and animalistic sheââ¬â¢s become, which is no surprise: sheââ¬â¢s joined Draculaââ¬â¢s army of the undead. Now, take a look at the imagery surrounding Arthur, Lucyââ¬â¢s former fiancee, and see how it compares to Lucyââ¬â¢s description. Even as heââ¬â¢s killing Lucy, Arthur is described as ââ¬Å"a figure of Thorâ⬠meaning heââ¬â¢s strong, heroic, and good with a hammer. Stoker specifically says Arthur is ââ¬Å"untremblingâ⬠in his task; despite its grisly nature, his steadiness showcases his commitment to protecting his country from the vampire threat...even when it means driving a stake in his loverââ¬â¢s heart. Additionally, his face has the ââ¬Å"shineâ⬠of duty, which is a nod to the glowing, angelic halos of angels. Arthurââ¬â¢s bravery and light stands in contrast to Lucyââ¬â¢s dark, demonic nature, and Stoker specifically uses imagery to show readers how good can triumph over evil. 3 Questions to Ask When Analyzing Imagery These examples have shown you how to find and analyze imagery, but youââ¬â¢ll have to do this all by yourself when you take the AP Literature exam. But donââ¬â¢t worrynow that youââ¬â¢re an expert, finding and analyzing imagery will be a breeze! But just in case you get stuck, here are three questions you can ask yourself to help you better analyze imagery in literature and poetry. Question 1: What Did I Imagine While I Was Reading? The hardest part about analyzing imagery is finding it in the first place. Like we mentioned earlier, a good way to do this is to look for nouns and search for words that describe them. Then you can start asking yourself if those descriptions are figurative imagery (i.e., do those words have any implied or metaphorical meaning). But when youââ¬â¢re crunched for time, you can go back to the tried-and-true method of using your imagination. Which parts of the text made you picture something in your mind? Since imagery is designed to spark your imagination, thereââ¬â¢s a great chance that section contains some sort of imagery! Question 2: What Does the Imagery Reveal About the Situation? This question helps you get to the meat-and-potatoes of your analysis really quickly. Once you find a piece of imagery, ask yourself what itââ¬â¢s showing you. It could be describing an important setting, plot point, or character. Make sure youââ¬â¢re asking yourself if thereââ¬â¢s figurative imagery at work, too. If youââ¬â¢re struggling here, you can always go back to the ââ¬Å"mental pictureâ⬠we talked about with the first question. What do you see in that image? Thereââ¬â¢s a good chance that whatever youââ¬â¢re imagining matters in some way. Once you have that image in your mind, you can start to ask yourself why that particular image is important. Hereââ¬â¢s what we mean: think about the Jurassic Park example we talked about earlier. The imagery there tells us some literal things about whatââ¬â¢s happening in the scene, but it also adds to the danger and suspense of the main charactersââ¬â¢ predicament. The same can be said for the excerpt from ââ¬Å"Daffodils,â⬠only instead of revealing a plot point, the imagery gives readers important insight into the narrator of the poem. Question 3: How Does the Imagery Affect the Mood of the Text? Once you find a good piece of imagery, ask yourself how it makes you feel. Is it hopeful? Scary? Depressed? Angry? The feelings associated with the imagery in a work can often reveal the theme of a text. Take Emily Dickinsonââ¬â¢s poem. What feelings are associated with the imagery surrounding ââ¬Å"hopeâ⬠? Well, birds are tame and delicate, and the bird Dickinson describes sings sweetly through lifeââ¬â¢s fierce storms. Hope is clearly a reassuring, gentle, uplifting thing. By asking yourself why Dickinson thinks hope is good, you can start to figure out some of the messages of the poem! What's Next? Test out your new-found imagery chops by analyzing a poem on your own! We think that Dylan Thomasââ¬â¢ ââ¬Å"Do not go gentle into that good nightâ⬠is a great place to start. You can find the full text of the poem, as well as additional analysis, here. Thereââ¬â¢s more to literary analysis than just knowing your way around imagery! Make sure youââ¬â¢re familiar with the most important literary devices, like personification, before you head into your AP test. There are two parts to the AP Literature test: the multiple choice section and the essay section. Some students worry about the written portion of the test so much that they forget to study for the multiple choice questions! Donââ¬â¢t let this be your situation. Make sure youââ¬â¢re preparing for the whole test by reading through this guide to mastering the AP Literature examââ¬â¢s multiple choice portion, too.
Friday, November 22, 2019
How to Write Dialogue That Captivates Your Reader
How to Write Dialogue That Captivates Your Reader How to Write Dialogue That Captivates Your Reader And unfortunately, your first reader will be an agent or an editor. You canââ¬â¢t slip anything boring past them. Your job is to make every word count. Thatââ¬â¢s the way to keep your reader riveted until the final page- no small task. Making every word count is how to write compelling dialogue. Readers love dialogue because: It breaks up intimidating blocks of narrative summary. It differentiates (through dialect and word choice) and reveals characters. Done well, it can move the story without author intrusion. But, as you have likely discovered, writing great dialogue is hard. If yours is bloated or obvious or telling or is in any other way uninteresting, readers wonââ¬â¢t stay with you long. So how about we leave them no choice? Need help writing your novel?à Click here to download my ultimate 12-step guide. How to Write Dialogue in 6 Steps Cut to the Bone Reveal Backstory Reveal Character Be Subtle Read Your Dialogue Out Loud Create a Make My Day Moment Step 1. Cut to the Bone Unless you need to reveal a character as a brainiac or a blowhard pretending to be one, omit needless words. Obviously, you wouldnââ¬â¢t render a conversation the way a court transcript includes repetition and even um, ah, uh, etc. But even beyond that, see how much you can chop without losing the point. Like this: ââ¬Å"What do you want to do thisà Sunday?à I thought wWe could go to the amusement park.â⬠ââ¬Å"I was thinking about renting a rowboat,â⬠Vladimir said.à on one of the lakes.â⬠ââ¬Å"Oh, Vladimir, that sounds wonderful! Iââ¬â¢ve never gone rowingà before.â⬠That doesnââ¬â¢t mean all your dialogue has to be short and choppy- just that youââ¬â¢ll cut the dead wood to keep to the point. Youââ¬â¢ll be surprised by how much power it adds to your prose. Step 2. Reveal Backstory Layering in backstory through dialogue is another way to keep your reader turning pages. Hinting at some incident for the first time is an automatic setup that demands a payoff. Example: As they headed toward the house, Janet whispered, ââ¬Å"Can we not have a repeat of Cincinnati?â⬠Jeanie shot her a double take. ââ¬Å"Believe me, I donââ¬â¢t want that any more than you do.â⬠ââ¬Å"Good,â⬠Janet said. ââ¬Å"I mean- â⬠ââ¬Å"Can we not talk about it, please?â⬠What normal reader wouldnââ¬â¢t assume they will talk about it at some point and stay with the story until they do? As the story progresses, you can reveal more and more about your protagonistââ¬â¢s past and have your story come full circle. This accomplishes two things: it offers a setup that should intrigue the reader, and it helps you avoid flashbacks. Need help writing your novel?à Click here to download my ultimate 12-step guide. Step 3. Reveal Character Your reader learns a lot about your characters through dialogue. You donââ¬â¢t have to TELL us theyââ¬â¢re sarcastic, witty, narcissistic, kind, or anything else. You can SHOW us by how they interact and by what they say. Step 4. Be Subtle Dialogue can accomplish a number of tasks. Here are three: 1. Subtext- where people say other than what they mean. This can be fun. Example: My friend sold a short story to a general-market magazine years ago about a girl named Cindy who falls in love with the slightly older boy next door, who sees her as just a little sister type. When they get to high school, Tommy is the big man on campus, captain of the football team, dating the head cheerleader, and pretty much ignoring Cindy. Sheââ¬â¢s just his younger neighbor and friend. Tommy leaves for college and word soon gets back to Cindy during her senior year of high school that he and his girlfriend have broken up. So when he comes home after his freshman year of college and is changing a tire on his car, Cindy just happens to walk outside. She strikes up a conversation with Tommy, and he looks up, stunned. Who is this beautylittle Cindy from next door? She says, ââ¬Å"Making a change, are you?â⬠Tommy looks at the tire and back at her and says, ââ¬Å"Yeah, I actually I am making a change.â⬠Cindy says, ââ¬Å"Well, Iââ¬â¢ve heard that rotating can be a good thing.â⬠And he says, ââ¬Å"Yeah, Iââ¬â¢ve heard that too.â⬠Thatââ¬â¢s subtext. Theyââ¬â¢re not saying what they really mean. Theyââ¬â¢re not really talking about changing the tire, are they? 2. Sidestepping- when a character responds to a question without answering it. Instead, what the character says is so profound and unexpected that it offers a whole new understanding of whatââ¬â¢s going on. Example: In the movie Patch Adams, the late Robin Williams played a brilliant young doctor who believes the Old Testament adage that ââ¬Å"laughter is the best medicine.â⬠He goes into the childrenââ¬â¢s cancer ward of a hospital wearing an inflated surgical glove on his head, making him look like a rooster. He wears bedpans for shoes and stomps about, flapping his arms and squawking. The children find it hilarious, but hospital directors consider it undignified and demand he stop. Patch Adams is trying to make one girl in particular- a hospital volunteer- laugh. But while everyone else thinks heââ¬â¢s funny, she never cracks a smile. Finally, Patch leaves the hospital to open a clinic in the country. Imagine his surprise when that humorless young lady appears to help him set up. At one point, she goes outside to rest, so Patch follows and sits opposite her. He says, ââ¬Å"Iââ¬â¢ve got to ask. Everybody thinks Iââ¬â¢m hysterical, but you. Iââ¬â¢ve tried everything. What is it with you? Why donââ¬â¢t you ever think anything I say is funny?â⬠After several seconds of silence, she says, ââ¬Å"Men have liked me all my lifeall my lifeâ⬠And we realize by the way she says it, she was abused as a child. Suddenly, we understand what this girl is all about. She doesnââ¬â¢t trust men, and she doesnââ¬â¢t laugh, because life isnââ¬â¢t funny. The way she responded did not answer his question. Her problem had nothing to do with him or his humor. Finally, Patch realizes that some things arenââ¬â¢t funny. Some things you just donââ¬â¢t make fun of. Sometimes, you need to quit cracking jokes and just listen. Itââ¬â¢s a great turnaround in the story. And an example of sidestep dialogue. 3. Silence The old truism that silence can be golden rings true for our last technique. Many, including Abraham Lincoln, have been credited with the line: ââ¬Å"Better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to speak and remove all doubt.â⬠One of the toughest things to learn as a writer is to avoid filling silent gaps. Just like we shouldnââ¬â¢t tell whatââ¬â¢s not happening in a story, neither do we need to write that someone didnââ¬â¢t respond or didnââ¬â¢t answer. If you donââ¬â¢t say they did, the reader will know they didnââ¬â¢t. Example: ââ¬Å"Well John,â⬠Linda said, ââ¬Å"what do you have to say for yourself?â⬠John set his jaw and stared out the window. ââ¬Å"Iââ¬â¢m waiting,â⬠she said. He lit a cigarette. Linda shook her head. ââ¬Å"I swear, John, honestly.â⬠Now, too many writers feel the need to write here, ââ¬Å"But he refused to say anything,â⬠or ââ¬Å"But he never responded.â⬠Donââ¬â¢t! We know, we get it- and itââ¬â¢s loud, effective, silent dialogue. The reader knows because John is saying nothing, and yet saying everything. Silence is golden. Step 5. Read Your Dialogue Out Loud One way to be certain your dialogue flows is to read it aloud or even act it out. Anything that doesnââ¬â¢t sound right wonââ¬â¢t read right either, so rewrite it until it does. Step 6. Create a ââ¬Å"Make My Dayâ⬠Moment Certain iconic lines of dialogue have become as legendary as the films and books they originate from: ââ¬Å"Frankly my dearâ⬠ââ¬Å"Thereââ¬â¢s no place like home.â⬠ââ¬Å"Weââ¬â¢re not in Kansas anymore.â⬠ââ¬Å"To my big brother George, the richest man in town.â⬠ââ¬Å"What we have here is failure to communicate.â⬠ââ¬Å"Go ahead, make my day.â⬠ââ¬Å"May the force be with you.â⬠ââ¬Å"Houston, we have a problem.â⬠ââ¬Å"Run, Forrest, run!â⬠ââ¬Å"You had me at hello.â⬠Most writers - even bestselling novelists - never create such an unforgettable line of dialogue. But striving to create one is a worthy effort. Ironically, it should fit so seamlessly it doesnââ¬â¢t draw attention to itself until fans begin quoting it. How to Use Dialogue Tags to Identify Speakers Dialogue attribution tags- he said, she said, etc.- indicate who is speaking. Resist the urge to get creative here. Said is almost always your best choice. Teachers who urge you to find alternatives are usually unpublished and believe agents and editors will be impressed. Trust me, they wonââ¬â¢t be. Avoid mannerisms of attribution. People say things. They donââ¬â¢t wheeze, gasp, sigh, laugh, grunt or snort them. They might do any of those things while saying them, which might be worth mentioning, but the emphasis should be on what is said, and readers just need to know who is saying it. Keep it simple. All those other descriptors turn the spotlight on an intrusive writer. Sometimes people whisper or shout or mumble, but let their choice of words indicate theyââ¬â¢re grumbling, etc. If itââ¬â¢s important that they sigh or laugh, separate that action from the dialogue. Jim sighed. ââ¬Å"I canââ¬â¢t take this anymore.â⬠Not: Jim sighed, ââ¬Å"I canââ¬â¢t take this anymore.â⬠Though you read them in school readers and classic fiction, attribution tags such as use of reply, retort, exclaim, and declare have become clicheà d and archaic. Youââ¬â¢ll still see them occasionally, but I suggest not using them. Often no attribution is needed. Use dialogue tags only when the reader wouldnââ¬â¢t otherwise know whoââ¬â¢s speaking. I once wrote an entire novel, The Last Operative, without attributing a single line of dialogue. Not a said, an asked, anything. I made clear through action who was speaking, and not one reader, even my editor, noticed. A common error is characters addressing each other by name too often. Real people rarely do this, and it often seems planted only to avoid a dialogue tag. Fictional dialogue should sound real. Donââ¬â¢t start your dialogue attribution tag with said. Rather, end with said. said Joe or said Mary, reads like a childrenââ¬â¢s book. Substitute he and she for the names and that will make it obvious. said he or said she just doesnââ¬â¢t sound right. Use said after the name for the best sound. Joe said or Mary said. Resist the urge to explain, and give the reader credit. The amateur writer often writes something like this: ââ¬Å"Iââ¬â¢m beat,â⬠exclaimed John tiredly. Besides telling and not showing - violating a cardinal rule of writing - it uses the archaic exclaimed for said, misplaces that before the name rather than after, and adds the redundant tiredly. The pro would write: John dropped onto the couch. ââ¬Å"Iââ¬â¢m beat.â⬠That shows rather than tells, and because Johnââ¬â¢s action has been described, we donââ¬â¢t need an attribution tag to know heââ¬â¢s speaking. How to Punctuate Dialogue Few things expose a beginner like incorrect punctuation, especially in dialogue. Agents and editors justifiably wonder if you read dialogue, let alone whether you can write it, if you write something like: ââ¬Å"I donââ¬â¢t know.â⬠she said. Or, ââ¬Å"What do you think?â⬠He said. To avoid common mistakes: Start a new paragraph for each speaker When one characterââ¬â¢s dialogue extends to more than one paragraph, start each subsequent paragraph with a double quotation mark, and place your closing double quotation mark only at the end of the final paragraph. Place punctuation inside the quotation marks, the dialogue tag outside: ââ¬Å"John was just here asking about you,â⬠Jim said. The attribution tag goes after the first clause of a compound sentence: ââ¬Å"Not tonight,â⬠he said, ââ¬Å"not in this weather.â⬠When dialogue ends with a question or exclamation mark, the dialogue tag following the quotation marks should be lowercase: à ââ¬Å"Iââ¬â¢m glad youââ¬â¢re here!â⬠she said. Action before dialogue takes a separate sentence: Anna shook her head. ââ¬Å"I canââ¬â¢t believe sheââ¬â¢s gone!â⬠Quoting within a quote requires single quotation marks: ââ¬Å"Lucy, Mom specifically said, ââ¬ËDo not cut your bangs,ââ¬â¢ and you did it anyway!â⬠When action or attribution interrupts dialogue, use lowercase as dialogue resumes: ââ¬Å"That,â⬠she said, ââ¬Å"hurt bad.â⬠Dialogue Examples If youââ¬â¢re old enough to remember the original Twilight Zone (hosted by Rod Serling) or Dragnet (starring and narrated by Jack Webb), you know how dialogue set the tone for their shows. Serling was sometimes whimsical, sometimes mysterious, but always provocative. ââ¬Å"Consider one middle-aged adult, lost in space and timeâ⬠¦Ã¢â¬ Jack Webb, as L.A. police detective Sergeant Joe Friday, was always deadly serious and monotone. ââ¬Å"Just the facts, maââ¬â¢am.â⬠Contrast those with the dialogue between Tom and his Aunt Polly in Tom Sawyer. If youââ¬â¢re anything like me, you were laughing from page 1. There! I mighta thought of that closet. What you been doing in there? Nothing. Nothing! Look at your hands. And look at your mouth. What IS that truck? I dont know, aunt. Well, I know. Its jam- thats what it is. Forty times Ive said if you didnt let that jam alone Id skin you. Hand me that switch. The switch hovered in the air- the peril was desperate- My! Look behind you, aunt! The old lady whirled round and snatched her skirts out of danger. The lad fled on the instant, scrambled up the highboard fence, and disappeared over it. Great dialogue can set the tone for your entire story and also differentiate characters, as we discussed earlier. In Huckleberry Finn,à Mark Twain delineates between Huck the Southern white boy and Jim the runaway slave by just hinting at their respective accents. Twain doesnââ¬â¢t use tags to tell whoââ¬â¢s speaking, yet the reader never confuses the two. Huck says, ââ¬Å"Jim, did yââ¬â¢all ever see a king?â⬠Yââ¬â¢all is the only word in that sentence that implies a Southern accent, but itââ¬â¢s enough. Jim says, ââ¬Å"I sho enough did.â⬠Huck says, ââ¬Å"You liar, Jim. You never seen no king.â⬠Jim says, ââ¬Å"I seen foh kings in a deck of cards.â⬠Huckââ¬â¢s bad grammar and Jimââ¬â¢s sho and foh are the only hints of their dialects. Contrived phonetic spelling would slow the reading, but look what Twain accomplished with simple choices. The Cardinal Sin of Dialogue The last thing you want is to produce on-the-nose dialogue. Apply to your own work those principles and the tools Iââ¬â¢ve outlined here, and I believe youââ¬â¢ll immediately see a huge difference. So will your reader. In the Comments, ask me any questions regarding how to write dialogue. Need help writing your novel?à Click here to download my ultimate 12-step guide.
Thursday, November 21, 2019
SLP 4 HR Training, Development, and Career Management Essay
SLP 4 HR Training, Development, and Career Management - Essay Example Perhaps the time management is one of the most important topics that every employee ought to be trained on (Kaushik, 2012). Obviously, every training and development program must be in accordance with the organizations policies although the methods used could have some strengths and shortcomings. Essentially, training and development can take different approaches in various organizations, particularly when it comes to the topic of time management (Saks, Haccoun, Belcourt, & Belcourt, 2010). It means that the method of training used plays an important role in determining the effectiveness of the training program (Dowling, Festing, & Engle, 2008). The best training method for the SLP organization would be conferences and seminars, especially if it is to be conducted on a group of eighteen employees. In this respect, the conferences work best when the number of staff involved is considerably high and the program is general to all (Fee, 2011). Before any training and development program commences, Human Resource Departments that offer the training, have to consider certain factors. The factors include planning for the training program, identifying the best methods of the training, working on the logistics of the training program, and providing and evaluation framework (Kaushik, 2012). The three concepts will feature in the training namely, training, education, and development with all of them geared towards the growth of the employees and the organization (Fee, 2011). Since most organizations conduct a performance appraisal regularly, it is important to mention that such organizations realize that poor time management is their worst enemy as far as overall productivity is concerned (Dowling, Festing, & Engle, 2008). Therefore, the employees have to undergo regular and robust training, especially on time management. Unlike other
Tuesday, November 19, 2019
Go tell it on the mountain by James Baldwin Essay - 1
Go tell it on the mountain by James Baldwin - Essay Example In the story, a lot of trouble mars marriage because what connects the couple is not the connection of love but the pretence of commitment dominated by the love of money, wealth, and status. The Father wants to be associated with the fame and the respect of the future wifeââ¬â¢s family. This greed drives this man which later turns to be sore when they finally reach the marriage life. The narrator says, ââ¬Å"My father is only mindful of the wealth and the fame that he stands to benefit ultimately if he marries my mother.â⬠The narrator also says that the father is concerned on the money-generating mission above any other things. The narrator says ââ¬Å"my father only brags to my mother of the depth of his pocket and how he has money. He has to love to share with my mother.â⬠The father is material driven. He seems not to care about anything and he has confidence in his money. He loves the taste of power and ââ¬Å"he delights when he condemns people. He seeks to claim sovereignty over people: this is the arrogance of life that seems to content him.â⬠The pain and confusion comes when it is evidently notable that the mother also has a different concept and weird perspective of a happy marriage. She is totally misled of what really makes a happy family relationship. The mother is dominated with ego and pride. She sees herself as the most intelligent creature on earth. This makes her to be coined in her own cocoon without being open with her fiancà ©. In any relationship where people have a lot to hide than share, trouble always shoots in. suspicion is always evident and mistrust always sets in between the couples. This creates constant disharmony and insecurity which results to quarrels and, fights and ultimately divorce. The mother is also driven by the illusions, which are farfetched from the reality. She lives with the illusions in the movie on how love affairs should be done. She has wrong concepts
Sunday, November 17, 2019
Compare the theme of outsiders in Frankenstein Essay Example for Free
Compare the theme of outsiders in Frankenstein Essay D, so he wanted to join the terrorist group to seek revenge. In this respect Daz is similar to the monster, they are both willing to commit heinous crimes for vengeance. Del thats my brovver thay catch im raiding wiv Dred. Top him dont thay. This quote shows how Dazs brother was killing in a raid with Dred. After the night in the Blue Moon where he saved Zoe and her friends, Daz finds himself an outcast from two societies. He was still physically a chippy, which means he is not allowed in Silverdale; however, he helped out the enemy subbies which make him not an accepted chippy. After Daz and Zoe they contact each other through letters and finally when they meet, the reader recognise that Daz does not want to be a chippy. Throughout this novel we are constantly reminded of this forbidden love. I seen this Subby girl, our mam. Forget her, Daz. Not easy, our mam. Not easy. Daz is given a negative response from his mum, when he explains that he has met Zoe. However, once Daz meets Zoe he realises he does not want to be an outsider any longer, Dazs priorities and views of subbies change. Like Victor, Daz is very determined; he takes a lot of risks for Zoe and to make his life better. It appears to the reader that Zoe has the perfect life, money, nice houses, cars and good facilities. However it becomes evermore clear that Zoe feels trapped and unhappy. Zoe is an outsider because after she meets Daz, Silverdale citizens see her as a chippy lover. Thats why we have fences and lights and guards some kids get fed up being cooped up a suburbs a pretty nice place but any place with a fence aroundll get to you, eventually. This quote shows the reader how a Subby teenager can become fed up with the enclosed lifestyle. Zoe feels this because she is brainwashed into believing her existence is happy and enjoyable. Similar to Daz, when the two forbidden lovers meet her priorities changes. Zoe the loyal and hard working daughter rebels against her parents old fashioned and single minded views. Unlike Daz, Zoe is an outsider by choice. Her easiest option could have been to lead a normal life as a young, well-educated Silverdale resident. Nevertheless, Zoe decides to leave the suburb and live in the city, choosing to become an outsider from two societies. Zoe chooses to be an outsider and is similar to Victor; she sees that defending things that are important to her holds great risks. For the first time I contemplated the enormity of the step I had just taken This quote shows how Zoe realises that she has left her Subby life to live in the city; this is the first physical sign of her becoming an outsider. In Daz 4 Zoe Zoes Grandmother is not an obvious outsider. To begin with Grandma is not a visible outsider, although later we go on to find she is the founder of the illegitimate organisation. She is very similar to Robert Walton as they are both outsiders in their thoughts and views, however they are not outcasts. Grandma was part of an underground outfit called F. A. I. R, which stands for Fraternal Alliance for Integration through Reunification. Resembling Victor, Robert Walton and Zoe, she is an outsider through choice and these views influence Zoe. Daz 4 Zoe and Frankenstein both discuss outsiders in society, and how people can be born outcasts and how others chose to be secluded from society because of their ambitions, beliefs or interests. We read how Daz and the Monster we forced into seclusion, isolated from society. Also how Zoe, Victor, Grandma and Robert Walton choose to live their lives dangerously and even unhappily because of their thoughts. The nineteenth century literature and the contemporary novel are relevant to todays society. In the present culture we have different castes, religions, races even different accents, Daz 4 Zoe shows an extreme version of abused power and prejudice. Due to advances in medical science in the present day limbs can be sewn on, body parts reshaped new skin tissue be formed. Frankenstein again shows excessive power, since the novel was written we have had cloning and artificial body parts The two novels both are severe results of social issues we have today. I feel the moral of the two novels combined is that with no action, modern society could find themselves in these difficult situations. 1 Show preview only The above preview is unformatted text This student written piece of work is one of many that can be found in our GCSE Mary Shelley section. Download this essay Print Save Not the one? Search for
Thursday, November 14, 2019
The Need for a Pariah Exposed in Those Who Walk Away From Omelas Essay
The Need for a Pariah Exposed in Those Who Walk Away From Omelasà à Affirmative action is perhaps the political hot potato of the decade. Its divisiveness has escalated racial tensions all across the nation, in forums political and academic. It also creates problems on a daily basis for millions of Americans in the workforce, education, housing, and so forth. Affirmative action, by its very definition, uses discrimination to attempt to create equality. Its ultimate goal is to make everyone equal to everyone else- intellectually, ability-wise, and (dare I say?) socially. What the proponents of this racial and gender communism do not realize is that society can only function in the absence of complete equality. Society is always in need of someone - be it a nationality, religion, or gender - to look down on. This point is most clearly made in the short story Those Who Walk Away From Omelas, a 1973 work by Ursula K. Leguin. The central message of Omelas is that society needs a pariah- someone to look down on in order to maintain its own happiness. à à à à à à à à à à à Omelas begins amidst a festival in the seemingly utopian city of Omelas. People are in a holiday spirit on this day, as they are every other day in Omelas. Mirth and good cheer seems to be the moods of all of the citizens. Though blissful, these people are by no means ignorant: They were not simple folks, you see, though they were happy...They were not less complex than us. The seemingly perfect city offers something to please every taste: festivals, good-natured orgies, drugs that arenââ¬â¢t habit-forming, beer, and so on. The citizens of Omelas have a complete love of life. There is no war, no hunger, no strife; in short, Omelas seems like the pinnacle of perfection. .. ...t this system is branded a racist or narrow-minded. Hence, those who would oppose affirmative action are becoming the objects of scorn and derision; this coupled with the fact that they are discriminated against by affirmative action policies means that they have become the pariahs! Leguinââ¬â¢ss story is now an allegory for them- they are now they small child, trapped and abused in the closet. So, in its attempt to eliminate discrimination and the oppressed society, affirmative action has created one instead! Few who support affirmative action because they loathe bigotry realize that by doing so they are themselves bigots. Leguinââ¬â¢s powerful statement that the pariah culture is omnipresent rings true when one considers that the pariah culture is merely perpetuated by the attempt to eradicate it. Works Cited: Ursula K. Le Guin, 'Those Who Walk Away from Omelas'
Tuesday, November 12, 2019
Easter Island’s End
2013-04-16 ENGL 102 Essay #1 Longer summery In the article, ââ¬Å"Easter Islandââ¬â¢s Endâ⬠by Jared Diamond, he states that the overpopulation and overusing the natural resources can affect and destroy our environment. Easter Island can be used as a warning that cultural and environmental dangers exist due to overexploitation. Although, civilizations have vanished from the island it still has a remaining mystery and history to its untouched landscape. Easter Island was formed out of an ancient volcanic eruption; the island is only sixty-four square miles with habitable land and subtropical weather that makes the soil fertile.Easter Island is famous for its tight-lipped statues that stand across the island, which were erected by the native Rapa Nui people. These are ancient wonders of the world that are still being studied to get a full understanding of how and why these statues were created. From written history, the explorerââ¬â¢s first impression of the island was that it has nothing but a sand island, there were nothing left on the island except for hundreds of the Rapa Nui statues. According to Diamond, the climate and location of the Easter Island should create abundance of trees, soils and other natural resources.Many questions have arisen to Easter Islandââ¬â¢s current existence. After many years of research, scientists and sociologists have come to a conclusion that the natural resources of the island were used by the islanders to survive their daily life, they cut down woods to transport those Rapa Nui statues and build canoes in order to find food. As time goes by, the population of Easter Island increased rapidly, and these islanders started to utilize all the natural resources abusively until the last tree was cut down.With todayââ¬â¢s rising population around the world, we have been exhausting our limited natural resources, if we do not learn to conserve all the limited natural resources, we will have nothing left for our future generations. Longer summery reflection I was very interested in the Easter Island topic when I first saw the title of the article. I have always seen pictures of the statues on Easter Island and wanted to visit there someday. I thought this would be good information to know about, so I started to read the article ââ¬Å"Easter Islandââ¬â¢s Endâ⬠by Jared Diamond.After I finished reading it the first time, I think I understood most of the article. But I still didnââ¬â¢t understand how the islanders collapsed the Easter Island. So I went on google and did some research. I found a Ted talk by Jared Diamond about how human collapsed the natural and civilization. After watching the video, it helped me a lot in understanding how human are slowly destroying our own planet, similar to what happened on Easter Island. After viewing the video, I went back to read the article again, and started to write down notes.I divided my long summery into five sections, the first section consis ting of the main idea of the article, over population and over using the natural resources lead Easter Island to an end. The second section is about the history of Easter Island, and what was on the island before it was destroyed. The third section is about the condition of Easter Island after it was destroyed. The fourth section is the conclusion of the summery, we can see that Easter Island is the miniature version of our earth, if we donââ¬â¢t stop over using our limited natural resources, our earth will end up like Easter Island. Shorter SummeryIn the article, ââ¬Å"Easter Islandââ¬â¢s Endâ⬠by Jared Diamond, he states that the overpopulation and overusing the natural resources can affect and destroy our environment. Easter Island can be used as a warning that cultural and environmental dangers exist due to overexploitation of natural resources. The local inhabitants of Easter Island over-utilized the island's natural resources to the point of a complete extinction o f those very resources that were sustaining them. Easter Island can be thought of as a small scale model of the earth, and what could hypothetically happen if we do not exercise natural resource sustainability and management.Shorter summery reflection I found that writing a short summery is much harder than writing a longer summery, especially on keeping it under 100 words. At the beginning, I didnââ¬â¢t know how to start with the shorter summery, but I thought a good way to do it is to condense my longer summery and make it into 100 words. So I start with filtering out the least important information from the longer summery. First thing I took out was the history and introduction of Easter Island. Then I filtered out the information about the gigantic statues. Finally, I deleted the example of how they waste the natural resources.After I have the edited version of the summery, I read it again, and thought that the most important part is the authorââ¬â¢s thesis, which is â⬠Å"he states that the overpopulation and overusing the natural resources can affect and destroy our environment. â⬠So I decided to keep the same sentence. In the article, the author clearly illustrate that the cause of the ending of the Easter Island is because of the islanders didnââ¬â¢t use their resources wisely. He wants to warn us that the Easter Island is a lesson for us and if we donââ¬â¢t want to end up like the islanders, we should stop abusing our limited natural resources.I expanded the information what I think I have learned from the article, and then make them into a academic form. This is how I put my shorter summery together. Critique and essay In ââ¬Å"Easter Islandââ¬â¢s Endâ⬠, published by Discover Magazine in 1995, written by Jared Diamond, a professor of geography and physiology at UCLA, has shown us the beginning till the end of the former heaven, the Easter Island. In the article, Diamond illustrates that overpopulating and overusing natural resources will result in destroying our natural environment. Easter Island is located in the southeastern Pacific Ocean.When the European explorers reached the island in 1722 they found a desolate landscape with less than 2,000 people existing there. They noticed that the islanders lived in caves and had a very limited supply of food. And they also found these gigantic statues that were carved out of stone. Those were evidence which proves that refined civilization once existed in Easter Island. Because of the unique location of the Easter Island, it has very good climate that creates abundance of natural resources. ââ¬Å"In theory, this combination of blessings should have made Easter a miniature paradise, remote from problems that beset the rest of the world. (165) However, when explorers discovered Easter Island, it was a completely opposite of the ââ¬Å"paradiseâ⬠. It makes us wonder what happened in this Island. The first hypothesis the researchers considered was the fo rest was lost because of climate change, but evidence quickly pointed to the hypothesis that the people had gradually destroyed their own island. Researchers predicted that the trees provided wood, building material for houses and canoes, fruit to eat, fiber for clothing. Most importantly, lots of woods were used as the first resource to move the stone statues.These statues are 33 feet tall, and weighed up to 99 tons. Some of them are very far from where they were constructed in the quarries to the coastal sites where they were positioned. With the trees slowly been cutting down, rain would have eroded the soil away. Population raised rapidly over generations, people started to unmanageably use the limited natural resources on the overpopulated island. As a result the islanders turned against one another because of the shortage of food. ââ¬Å"Gradually trees become fewer, smaller, and less important.By the time the last fruit-bearing adult palm tree was cut, palms had long since ce ased to be of economic significance. â⬠(173)The life of paradise Easter Island has come to an end. In the article, Diamond has point out that we can consider our planet as a large version of the Easter Island. We have a potentially non-sustainable eco system. If we look at our progression over the last 300 years that we have inhabited North America, we will notice that we have removed many natural resources. Such as Trees in the Northwest, plains in the Midwest, the marshes of Florida, all of which have been devastated by humans in the past centuries.Our great grandparents did not notice the destruction, nor will I ever be able to actually notice some of it myself. We must learn from the lesson of the Easter Island and start to use our natural resources wisely. If we donââ¬â¢t preserve our environment by recycling, saving trees, and protecting land, we will be forced to face the same ending as the islanders. Natural resources are important and limited, if we donââ¬â¢t pro tect them, the nature will pay back to us and there will be nothing left for our future generation. Citation Diamond, Jared. ââ¬Å"Easter Island's End. â⬠Science and Society (2007): 164-74. Print.
Saturday, November 9, 2019
The Health Nutritional Education
When parents send their children off to college, they might entertain the notion that their little darlings, having been brought up with the four basic food groups, will continue to practice impeccable dietary habits. Little do they know that their children skip meals, guzzle soda by the case, subsist on a diet that would make a mother cringe (Baker 12). Quick and easy meals are most attractive to students, so the microwave plays a major role in student's living habits. One half of all students say they use a microwave everyday, reports Roper CollegeTrack, an annual survey of student's behavior and attitudes. When college students arrive on campus there are so many changes they must go through. The simple fact of not being home can cause major amounts of stress, therefore changing a young-adult's eating habits. From my personal experiences as a college student, I have seen one of two things happen to students: they either gain weight or lose weight. When I came to college I weighed 150lbs. By the time I went home for my first Christmas break I weighed 173lbs. I got bigger, but not necessarily fatter. I weighed more, but my pants fit more loosely. A steady diet and consistent physical activity are the two keys to keeping the body you want during the most hectic, unstructured time of your life. My roommate played football with me my freshman year and weighed approximately 280lbs. He decided not to play anymore and wanted to lose weight. He began to workout and dieting right. He now weighs approximately 245lbs. This is a prime example of knowing what is right to eat for you. College students who leave home to live on campus or in an apartment face a period of transition during which they must assume greater responsibility for themselves, and this includes responsibility for their nutrition and dietary habits. Differences in dietary habits among college students have been well documented. Several factors have been shown to influence food selection, including gender, the desire to lose weight, age, academic major, and body-image perception. The location of residence has also been shown to influence food selection, but the relation between food selection and nutrient intake has not been documented (Beerman 1). For many students, living on a university campus is a traditional period between living at home with parents and living independently. Food decisions are among the newest responsibility that many students' face. Because new eating habits developed during these years, both negative and positive, are likely to be maintained, nutrient education effects have been targeted towards this group. The amount of information that people know about nutrition does not always affect what they eat. Many college students who do not major in nutrition take a course in basic nutrition, and the changes in student's concerns, habits, and knowledge of nutrition because of taking such a course were studied. Not all college students are required to take a nutrition course as a requirement to complete their degree. I believe that it would make a major difference in eating habits of many college students if they did. I took a ââ¬Å"mini pollâ⬠in Whiteford Hall. I asked twenty different girls what their biggest nutritional fear of coming to college was. All twenty girls said that they were scared to get fat or gain weight. I asked them if they were going to take this nutrition course any time during their education here. Only seven said they would consider taking the course. I have not yet completed this course, but I have learned so many new things about my body and the way the works. Now I feel that I can lead a healthy life from the knowledge I have accumulated from this course. Upon completing a basic nutrition course, students felt that they had learned a lot about nutrition, but only 45 percent said that they made changes in their eating habits because of this. The only statistically significant change in food habits was the tendency to drink low-fat milk. Most also decreased their use of vitamins and mineral supplements (Mitchell 7). The Basic Nutrition course for the non-nutrition major may be the most widespread, in-depth means of teaching nutrition to college students. This course provides both academic and practical nutritional education, so the teaching is complicated by the need ââ¬Å"to create informed consumers who value good nutrition and consume nutritious foods throughout their lives. Classroom tests measure textbook nutritional knowledge, but the practical application is not measurable. Several studies have found that nutritional knowledge is not predicting of dietary practices (Mitchell 8). I don't agree with this statement. I believe that the more nutritional knowledge that you have, the better you will eat. If you know something is bad for your body, I'm sure you will refrain from eating it. You might not totally remove it from your diet, but you will probably lower your intake of the specific item. If you have no knowledge of the nutritional value of what you eat, you will have no chance of being a healthy person. College is a very demanding time in your in your life, both physically and mentally. You need all of the help you can get. Having a consistently healthy diet can play a major role in your college existence. You need the right type of energy to complete all of your daily tasks. If you have no knowledge of dietary requirements or the nutritional value of different foods, you can not make the right decisions for food consumption. College students indicated that the greatest value of improved nutrition was better health in the future. This should be considered in motivating students to make dietary changes (Mitchell 8). Vegetarian eating habits are popular among college-aged and teenage people. About 15 percent of the 15 million college students eat vegetarian meals. However, vegetarianism is more popular among women than men. 50 percent of women ages 18-19 believe in vegetarianism. Many young vegetarians choose not to eat meat in order to reduce the intake of fat, but some will occasionally eat meat. However, young vegetarians definitely do not prefer vegetarian-style meat products (Walker 6). To many Americans, the term ââ¬Å"vegetarianâ⬠conjures up images of hippies noshing on tofu and brown rice. But a new generation of vegetarians may bring meatless eating out of the extreme and into the mainstream. The new bastions of vegetarianism are college campuses (Walker 7). Young women seem to be driving the trend toward meatless eating. Nearly 50 percent of women college students say vegetarianism is in compared with the 33 percent of men students, according to Roper CollegeTrack. Pamela Limpitt, food service purchasing director for the University of Pennsylvania, agrees: ââ¬Å"I'd say 9 in 10 of our vegetarian students are women (Walker 12). A survey of young female athletes at a midwestern university reveals that nutrition knowledge is positively related to healthy eating practices. Data on these two indicators were collected to compare nutrition between female high school and college athletes in 1992. Analysis shows that the older athletes had more accurate nutrition knowledge and better eating habits than their younger counterparts. Moreover, a significant proportion indicated that they often turn to their coaches and trainers for this type of information, suggesting that physical education teachers can shape nutrition attitudes (Buch 1). Coaches and others who work with athletes must teach young people how to select nutritious foods that will promote a lifetime of good health. Young female athletes' concerns about weight and body image strongly influence their eating practices. Knowledge alone is not enough to ensure good dietary habits. Attitudes also affect behavior (Buch 2). Nutrition knowledge is positively associated with age, education, dietary pattern, sources of nutrition education, and length of time in a sport (Frederick & Hawkins, 1992; Perron & Endres, 1985). Other important factors, such as concern for weight and the dependence on others for food selection, also affect food consumption (Barr, 1987). Athletes are always concerned with their performance and how to improve it. They may work to improve their technique, lift weights, or add the right nutrients in their body to perform at optimum levels. The only problem is that any athletes do not have the proper nutritional knowledge to make the right dietary decisions. For example, to build one pound of lean tissue, an athlete must consume approximately 98 grams of protein and 2,800 calories for extra energy to synthesize muscle (Williams, 1988). If this were the athlete's goal for a week it would mean 14 grams of protein and 400 calories per day in addition to the usual diet. Fourteen grams of protein can be obtained in two glasses of milk or two ounces of lean meat. With a small amount of additional protein and enough fuel from complex carbohydrates, muscle building can occur. This is all very simple if you have the knowledge. Most athletes think that for muscle building you must take supplements or just eat a lot in general. This is why nutritional education is so important for an athlete to succeed in a very competitive age of sports competition. College is a very hard time for a young adult to be worrying about too many things at once. They have been fed all of their lives and been taught what is good and what is bad for them. There are some many outside factors that make your food selections for you. Many of these choices, you have no control over. That is why I believe nutritional knowledge is so very important in a college student's survival. If you eat the right things you will have no weight or health problems. A good diet can ensure a long energetic life. During your college years you need all of the energy you need to pull ââ¬Å"all nightersâ⬠during exams and when writing nutrition papers. The more knowledge you have the better your body will feel and the healthier you will be.
Thursday, November 7, 2019
Work out vs. Workout
Work out vs. Workout Work out vs. Workout Work out vs. Workout By Maeve Maddox A reader who frequents health and fitness sites is disturbed by a lack of professional editing: Ive noticed that nobody, literally nobody makes a distinction between the noun workout and the verb work out. On every website, I find statements like You have to workout three times a week. So I was wondering if you could address that issue in one of your upcoming posts. The reader is not exaggerating by much. Here are some examples from health and fitness sites and forums that I visited: How often should you workout per week? Should be: How often should you work out per week? Where do you workout? Should be: Where do you work out? First, warm up with some joint rotations, in order to lubricate your joints and prepare them forà the work out.à Should be: First, warm up with some joint rotations, in order to lubricate your joints and prepare them forà the workout.à Iââ¬â¢m a night person and prefer to workout at night. Should be: Iââ¬â¢m a night person and prefer to work out at night. A few people have asked me whatà my work outà routine is. Should be: A few people have asked me whatà my workoutà routine is. NOTE: One-word workout is also used as an adjective as in ââ¬Å"my workout routine.â⬠One way to avoid the error is to look for words that precede the terms. The noun workout is often preceded by an article or an adjective: ââ¬Å"the workout,â⬠ââ¬Å"my workout.â⬠The verb is often used in its infinitive form, so the preceding to provides a useful clue. Here are some examples of other noun/adjective/verb combinations that are confused in this way: 1. turnout (noun) / turn out (verb) Big turn outà for launch of new play area Should be: Big turnoutà for launch of new play area We had many parents turnout for the second high school informational meeting Should be: We had many parents turn out for the second high school informational meeting. 2. washout (noun) / wash out (verb) It is during this time that mostà recruits washout. Should be: It is during this time that mostà recruits wash out. Authorities concerned over wash out rate. Should be: Authorities concerned over washout rate. Three more such combos are: rollout/roll out, checkout/check out, and cutout /cut out. Iââ¬â¢m sure you can think of more. Hereââ¬â¢s a mnemonic written in pig propaganda style (Animal Farm) that may help: One word, Noun, Two words, Verb. Want to improve your English in five minutes a day? Get a subscription and start receiving our writing tips and exercises daily! Keep learning! Browse the Misused Words category, check our popular posts, or choose a related post below:When to Capitalize Animal and Plant Names50 Types of Propaganda45 Idioms with "Roll"
Tuesday, November 5, 2019
Identifying and Controlling Powdery Mildew on Trees
Identifying and Controlling Powdery Mildew on Trees Powdery mildew is a common disease that appears as a white powdery substance on a treeà leaf surface. The powdery appearance comes from millions of tiny fungal spores, which are spread in air currents to cause new infections. Powdery mildew attacks all kinds of landscape plants, including trees. Fortunately, although the disease is disfiguring, it rarely kills a tree.à Almost any tree species can be affected by powdery mildew, but the most common are maple, basswood, dogwood, lilac, magnolia, crabapple, catalpa, and oaks.à Identification Powdery mildew diseaseà is caused by many different species of fungi, with Erysiphe cichoacearum reported to be the most common culprit.à According to the University of Minnesota:à Powdery mildew appears as superficial growth on plant surfaces and is seen as white to gray powdery spots, blotches or felt-like mats on leaves, stems, and buds.Infected plants may appear to be sprinkled with baby powder or covered in cobwebs.The disease is often most severe on young leaves, water sprouts, and green shoots.Once severely infected, leaves may turn yellow and fall prematurely during the growing season.In some plants, leaves turn purple to red around the infection.In late summer/early fall, tiny round orange to black balls form within white fungal mats.Most prevalent when outdoor conditions consist of cool temperatures with high humidity; however, it can be seen in warm, dry conditions as well.The disease is most severe on plants or plant parts in shaded areas with poor air movement (interior or lower branches). Biology of the Fungus Some powdery mildew fungi survive winter inside structures known as chasmothecium, which contain the spores. In spring, the chasmothecium rupture to release spores that are then spread by the wind. Other species of powdery mildew survive the winter as a dormant fungus in the infected buds or shoot tips. In spring, these spores start new infections on new plant growth. As the growing season progresses, news spores are produced and transferred to new plants on the wind.à Prevention Powdery mildew is rarely a tree killer,à but it can disfigure specimens in the landscape. It is a product of moist conditions and is usually seen in the wetter spring and fall seasons. In manyà areas, powdery mildew is virtually unavoidable during the most humid parts of the period from spring through fall. Once dryer weather returns, the fungus usually retreats. It may not be necessary to treat the fungus at all, but certain measures may prevent it from becoming prevalent. This humidity-loving fungus can be controlled only if moisture can be controlled. Dont plant trees in heavily-shaded areas and provide plenty of space for air movement and growing room. Prune trees and shrubs to improve air movement between the branches. Additional methods for controlling powdery mildew: Choose disease-resistant varieties whenever possible. Mildew-resistant cultivars are available for many plants.Do not overcrowd plants. Adequate spacing improves air circulation and reduces powdery mildew infection.Prune the tree or shrub to increase light penetration and improve air circulation throughout the canopy. But avoid excessive pruning of infected plants- do your pruning during inactive periods.à Avoid fertilizing trees and shrubs when they are suffering from powdery mildew. Fertilizing stimulates new growth and may hasten the spread of the fungal infection.à Do not compost infected branches or leaves. The spores will remain in the compost and may infect other plants.à Controlling Powdery Mildew Commercial fungicides will kill powdery mildew, but many experts advise using these toxic chemicals only on specimen plants that are highly prized since the fungus rarely kills trees.à Chemical fungicide treatments that kill powdery mildew include : Thiophanate methylChlorothalonilSulfur (but not for sulfur-sensitive plants such as viburnum)Potassium bicarbonate Sulfer is perhaps the most common fungicide for powdery mildew. Spray wettable sulfur onto affected leaves at the recommended rate specified by the label. Sulfur may injure tender foliage, especially in hot weather, so be careful. Do not use sulfur on walnuts, as injury may occur. Where important plants have a history of powdery mildew infection, treat them preemptively, before the fungus appears.à A somewhat effective non-chemical treatment is to spray the plants with a mixture of household baking soda and water.
Sunday, November 3, 2019
Cryptography Research Paper Example | Topics and Well Written Essays - 1000 words
Cryptography - Research Paper Example The construction of c is done in such a way that there are elements which are redundant in it. This will, therefore, enable the receiver to reconstruct c even if some bits of c are corrupted by noise; the receiver will eventually reconstruct m (Gary 93). In a formal manner, an error correcting code is composed of a set, C? {0, 1} n of codewords. This set has strings which enables messages to be mapped in it before they are transmitted. In this case, a code that will be used for k-bit messages, C will have 2k elements which are distinct. So that there is some redundancy, there will be a need to have n>k. codes that are used for correcting errors can be defined in spaces which are non-binary too and this paper has construction which is straightforward and extensible in these non-binary spaces (Denning 72). For error correcting codes to be used, there will be a need for functions that will enable us to encode and decode messages. In this paper we will let M = {0, 1}k be a representation of the space message. There is a translation function, g : M C, which represent a one-to-one mapping capability of messages to codewords. What this means is that g is the mapping that is used before the transmission takes place. On the other hand, g-1 is the function that is used upon receiving of messages to retrieve codes in the codeword. There is a function, referred to as decoding function that is used for mapping n-bits that are arbitrary to codewords. This is the function, f : {0, 1}1 C U {O}. If the f function is successful, it will manage to map a given string which has n-bits x to the nearest codeword that is found in C (that is, the proximity to nearness in Hamming distance). If this not the case, then f will fail and the output will be O3. The robustness that an error-correcting code has will depend on the distance between the codewords. To make this more definite, we will need some fundamental notation that regard strings of the binary digits. For this case, we will use + and ââ¬â to represent bitwise XOR operator on the bit strings. We will use a measurement Hamming weight, which is the number of ââ¬Ë1ââ¬â¢ bits that are found in u. The Hamming weight is denoted by ||u|| (this is the weight of a string which has n strings). The Hamming weight has a precise definition of the number of ââ¬Ëlââ¬â¢ bits that are found in u. In the same perspective, the Hamming distance that is found between two strings, u and v is defined as the number of digits that make two strings to be different (Gary 62). In an equivalent manner, the Hamming distance will be equal to ||u - v||. We normally take it that a function that is used for decoding, that is function f, will have a correction threshold with a size of t if it has the ability to correct any set of t bit errors. In a more definite manner, for any codeword c â⠬ C, and any error term e â⠬ {0, 1}n, that has || e ||? t, this is the case that f(c+e) = c. in this case, we will regard C to have a correction threshold which has a size of t if there is a function f for C for t, which also has a correction threshold of size t. there is a an observation that the distance that is found between two codewords in C should have a distance of at least 2t + 1. The neighborhood of a codeword c is defined to be f-1 (c). This means that the neighborhood of c has a subset of strings that are n-bit long where f maps to c. the function that is used for decoding, that is function f, is set in such a way that f-1(c) has a close proximity to c that any other code word that
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